Carolina Home is a very personal and heartfelt script. The story is solid, even if it doesn't feel new, but I think this script depends pretty much on it's atmosphere. It feels real, the emotions feel real and in the end it becomes a real tearjerker - in a good way.

Title Reviewed: CAROLINA HOME
Reviewed by: KazKazui

I enjoyed this read. It was hard work to get into at first, but the skillful writing got me hooked and kept me interested to the end. At the start, I wonder if the sepia photographs are the best way to describe the horror of what happens in 1913.

Title Reviewed: The Road to Jerico
Reviewed by: P Meehan

Well, I read the whole thing. I am sorry, I really don’t have a great deal of positives for you. This is one of the least coherent screenplays I have read in 120+ TS reviews.

Title Reviewed: Recipe for Love
Reviewed by: Agent Cooper

This is quite a rambling read. It seems to mix genres, and I'm not sure it really pulls the process off. There are some really nice light comedy and a quirkiness which is commendable, but for me it's just getting lost at the moment.

Title Reviewed: ROUTE 55
Reviewed by: Shirley Day

The comic is about zombies on campus ending the world as we know it. Wormser is the hero and the world as he knew it definately ended when he met the Zombie. The comic was presented in black and white and color would improve it in my opinion.

Title Reviewed: Chaos Campus: Sorority Girls vs. Zombies Preview #3
Reviewed by: chessaol

As I wrote for a review of a surreal screenplay on this site, I'm not a big fan of the "Synedoche, New York" or "After Hours" stuff. In fact, I dislike it severely. I am glad that you will move onto linear, conventional films because I saw flashes of talent in this movie.

Title Reviewed: Reverie
Reviewed by: DGreene

Dude.... Work on the audio levels. Were you TRYING to anger people with the constant yelling at eardrum-piercing decibels?

Title Reviewed: An Actor's Nightmare
Reviewed by: DGreene

A few grammatical and spelling errors: p. 2 "than again" - should be "then" p. 8 "drunk" - drink p. 33 "all the doctor does it talk" p. 50 "cause and affect" -- "effect" is the noun's spelling p. 51 "her's" - no apostrophe p. 51 "a irritant" p. 52 "stares it him" p. 64 "It's is different" p. 94 "manically" - "maniacally?" I loved the beginning of this screenplay and the manner in which you introduced Freud. I also loved its ending.

Title Reviewed: Freudian Sip
Reviewed by: DGreene

The biggest difficulty in writing anything fantasy or sci-fi is making sure the audience understands the new world you are creating and the rules that govern it. That is especially difficult in a fantasy screenplay, where you don't have the luxury that a novel does of being able to spend pages and pages describing pieces of the lore and backstory. You need to get the audience to suspend disbelief and get into your world, and you need to do it fast and VISUALLY.

Title Reviewed: The Battle of Moytirra
Reviewed by: whitc101

This was fast paced and a quick read, especially considering in comes in at 125 pages. Right off the bat, the concept is engaging and interesting and there's actually been an increase in the number of women bank robbers, at least where I live. It's apparent at the beginning that this is meant to be a fun/exploitation type film.

Title Reviewed: Trench Coat Blonde
Reviewed by: macaggiano

I thought this was a good story with a contemporary theme to it. With obesity in America growing as it were, sooner or later people have to come to terms with it and there seems to be a niche of men who are quite attracted to large women. There are some aspects to the story I don't understand completely such as the old man dying at the end; symbolic I suppose, representing something in Nina's life dying and her grieving over it, perhaps her new role as a sex object and her giving up hope of finding love.

Title Reviewed: Maudlin Nina
Reviewed by: murraymd

I’m prejudiced I suppose, teenagers in indecision annoy me. It follows that coming of age movies are not my favorite either. So you can evaluate this review accordingly. There just didn’t seem to be enough going on in the beginning.

Title Reviewed: Alistair Useless
Reviewed by: Debasura

Great job! I read the script in one sitting. I liked how efficiently you were in your writing.

Title Reviewed: The Road to Jerico
Reviewed by: karthig

Meth Lab Script review notes: I found the intro to be somewhat weak in detail. It failed to instantly draw me in, receive any identification of time, place so while I was reading, I had no idea if it was now, then, there, here and disrupted me from feeling located.

Title Reviewed: Meth Lab
Reviewed by: darionuniverse

Hello I'm new to this site and didn't know about requesting assignments, so this is a free will review. I hope you'll find my comments constructive.

Title Reviewed: Date My Dad
Reviewed by: RichardJBartlett

Below the Surface What is below The Surface? Is there mystery and suspense?

Title Reviewed: The Surface
Reviewed by: srhite

This is a really interesting concept and while I have never seen Aliens in the Attic I can see this movie working as a children’s sci-fi in today’s market. The best thing you have so far is a really strong beginning. The pacing is fast and it sucked me into the story.

Title Reviewed: Space Vacation
Reviewed by: Boxgoblin3487

I think the main thing this story does well, and where its greatest potential is, is in the setting -- the outskirts of Corpus Christi Texas in late summer. It's hot as hell. It almost has the feel of one of those old spaghetti westerns, with the sweat beading up on everyone's lips.

Title Reviewed: The Law of Expectation
Reviewed by: dejohnette

Overall: A nice attempt, but needs work on structure, dialogue, and editing. -Your margins are incorrect. Dialogue blocks look bigger than they should, right-hand margin is definitely wrong.

Title Reviewed: Date My Dad
Reviewed by: filmwriter karyn

A goofy light hearted comedy. This is a simple script, which has great appeal. Various moments proved to be very entertaining.

Title Reviewed: The Possum Gulch Gang (V2)
Reviewed by: RaphaelMichaels