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Posted by: c4stein1

Thanks for the constructive review! I really appreciate it :) ]]> Re: Pagan Sage http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2614737 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 23:43:23 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

Pagan Sage wrote:
Thanks. Quite a bio. Sure this 'live life to the max' screenplay is not auto-biographical? ;) Not to boast, but OZ is flooded with good cheap cabernet. Cheers.


Not auto-biographical at all thank goodness - if you get a chance to read it you'll see why - and I love Aussie wines - although I generally go for your Shiraz - any recommendations on the cabs? ]]> Re: pennpad http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2221472 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 23:23:47 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

Thanks for your notes on Divided Loyalties. Best of luck with The Gangster's Son and Godfather's, Inc.
-Kele ]]> Re: koosalagoopagoop http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2993473 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 23:20:00 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

koosalagoopagoop wrote:
Heh, happy to do it. Learned from Ken Rotcop.
You got any scripts you're anxiously awaiting feedback on? I'm happy to read one for ya. In fact, if that logline belongs to one......I'd be more than happy to read that!


That logline does indeed belong to a script I hope to post tomorrow - hope you get assigned! ]]> Re: agilitygsd http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2355168 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 22:46:50 -0700

Posted by: Pagan Sage

Thanks. Quite a bio. Sure this 'live life to the max' screenplay is not auto-biographical? ;) Not to boast, but OZ is flooded with good cheap cabernet. Cheers. ]]> Re: shedenbo http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2041 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 22:09:23 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

Thanks for the great suggestion on the logline!

How's ICIHTKY coming along? ]]> Re: Pagan Sage http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2614737 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 22:07:07 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

Thanks for the great suggestion on the logline - and I love your MB quote. ]]> Re: dave_rugely http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A1126129 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 22:01:38 -0700

Posted by: 77kart

1, Congratulations on optioning your Stunners script and also being ROM. That puts your writing career well ahead of mine.

2. In my review of Diplomat, my comment, "At the moment, she's just a clueless, amoral, implausible character," is unnecessarily harsh. Allow me to amend it to, "At the moment, she needs work."

Good luck with it. ]]> Re: postghost87 http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2386445 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 21:35:54 -0700

Posted by: Ted Frothingham

Thanks for your review, PG87.

Of Trudeau, know that Trudeau represents many things. One, he's Jay's 'best friend' while on the road. Two, Keith is all worried about 'the world', right? Trudeau is that in spades. Three, you know how you thought Jay needed to grow up? Trudeau is the Devil inviting him to remain juvenile. And so Jay must confront 'the devil' in order to grow up. Therefore, four, he's a sub-antagonist while Jay is nowhere near Keith. And finally, just because Trudeau is worldly doesn't mean he's stupid. Ever hear of The Wise Man In The Cave? Trudeau plays this screenwriting role twice, giving the same advice at two key moments.

That's a lot of relevance to rip out, don't you think? ]]> Re: agilitygsd http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2355168 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 21:28:51 -0700

Posted by: koosalagoopagoop

Heh, happy to do it. Learned from Ken Rotcop.
You got any scripts you're anxiously awaiting feedback on? I'm happy to read one for ya. In fact, if that logline belongs to one......I'd be more than happy to read that! ]]> Re: koosalagoopagoop http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2993473 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 21:17:52 -0700

Posted by: agilitygsd

Thanks for the excellent logline suggestion - you boiled that right down to it's essence.
]]> Re: srhite http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A975335 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 21:14:43 -0700

Posted by: srhite

OldFFF wrote:
Scott,
Thanks for the careful review. It always helps to know what didn't work. I did go get the new FD 8. The pdf file is much more friendly.
John
John, The pdf file actually is important, because producer types definitely do ask for pdf files. And I can guarantee that they use the FIND function to look for things in a script.

Glad the review didn't ruffle your feathers. I try to mention most anything that might be worthwhile. Keep writing! ]]> Re: 77kart http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2400478 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 20:07:48 -0700

Posted by: dave_rugely

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my screenplay "Diplomat".

Dave ]]> Re: srhite http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A975335 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:58:39 -0700

Posted by: OldFFF

Scott,
Thanks for the careful review. It always helps to know what didn't work. I did go get the new FD 8. The pdf file is much more friendly.
John ]]> Re: P Meehan http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A3020122 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:54:53 -0700

Posted by: OldFFF

PM,
Thanks for the review of my honor story. I appreciate the comments. It's good to know the things that aren't selling themselves to the attentive reader.
John ]]> Re: SMLeddy http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2840988 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:52:11 -0700

Posted by: OldFFF

SML
You're right. My honor story is definitely indie fodder. Thanks for the attention to things to improve. I appreciate the help.
John ]]> Re: TriggerStreet TV Episode 92 - "Farewell...For now" http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/TriggerDigest?oid=oid%3A3040174 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:41:34 -0700

Posted by: mystiquetur

Loved the podcast. Can't wait to see the new format at trigg.la ]]> Re: N10city http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A978133 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:11:27 -0700

Posted by: koosalagoopagoop

Hey man,

Thanks a lot for reading Double or Nothing. I definitely was not trying to go the family guy route, but I appreciate the fact that you gave a really solid review. Your notes were useful and definitely will be helpful in the next draft. ]]> Re: TattooedPicasso http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A2134112 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 19:08:14 -0700

Posted by: jessariah

Hey there,

Thanks for taking the time to read and review Sketched. I'm glad you liked it.

And don't feel bad about knocking the formatting -- I've gotten that from a number of people.

Good luck to you.

KH ]]> Re: jessariah http://www.triggerstreet.com/gyrobase/Member?oid=oid%3A1278379 Tue, 9 Mar 2010 18:37:22 -0700

Posted by: TattooedPicasso

Man, I just read the production notes after posting my review of SKETCHED. Disregard all the crap about camera directions. It's obvious you know what you're doing! Good luck, dude! ]]>