Mike Leon

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01/16/2009
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Submissions By Mike Leon

Recession Proof Uploaded: 11/16/2009
by Mike Leon
Screenplay - Comedy, Crime
Unable to find employment in the collapsing economy, two college guys start their own business in the only recession proof expand and collapse synopsis
Death Volleyball 2000 Uploaded: 08/27/2009
by Mike Leon
Screenplay - Comedy, Horror, Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Bump. Spike. Survive. expand and collapse synopsis
Rated R Uploaded: 08/23/2009
by Mike Leon
Screenplay - Action
A bored video store clerk learns that her co-worker is really a disgruntled action hero hiding from super villains. expand and collapse synopsis
The C Word Uploaded: 06/25/2009
by Mike Leon
Screenplay - Comedy, Romance
A famous romance novelist falls in love with the book critic that he called 'the c word' on national television. expand and collapse synopsis
Heart of Dorkness Uploaded: 02/05/2009
by Mike Leon
Screenplay - Comedy
A socialite who accidentally sells her nerdy boyfriend's childhood toy collection must find a way to retrieve them when he expand and collapse synopsis

Reviews by Mike Leon (23)

Let Me Whip Out My GLOCK and Bust a Cap Ranking Review
By: Mike Leon
Review of: The Woods
on: 08/03/2009
You spelled Glock wrong a bunch of times. There are some your/you're confusions and a few other typos. I couldn't... [more]
Look out! The Trilateral Commission is behind you! Ranking Review
By: Mike Leon
Review of: Forked
on: 08/01/2009
This script was wavering. I wasn't too crazy about it, but it wasn't bad. The dialogue is a little off... [more]
100% NATURAL EXCELLENT SOURCE OF WHOLE GRAIN* Ranking Review
By: Mike Leon
Review of: The Howling 23rd and the Seed of Destruction (4/17/09)
on: 07/05/2009
It's okay. I'm not crazy about it, but it's okay. There aren't any glaring flaws I can point out. You... [more]
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Recent Posts (16)

ON: 07/24/10
I made it to the quarters with one of my scripts this year. I entered Rated R and The C Word in... [more]
ON: 08/27/09
Here's how to motivate yourself. Get a McJob. When I'm busy I write better material faster.... [more]
ON: 06/30/09
I got the star now and the script has been assigned to more people too. [more]
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I liked Recession Proof and I think It's pretty good. I also think the story has a chance to be great. I think maybe it should be darker. I find some of the humor a little dark and sometimes dry, which I love. The plot screams dark comedy but It seemed a little too light-hearted to me. One thing I would like to see is the murder to not be accidental.
no image submitted Posted by drewcrew December 19, 2009
Hi Mike. Thanks for taking the time to review Wolflord and provide feedback. Much appreciated. Cheers.
no image submitted Posted by Pagan Sage September 14, 2009
Ahhh, I now understand the opening scene, thanks for clearing that up. As for page 36 (and other parts) I read the other reviews and think that the story definitely appeals to a certain audience. Readers who aren't a part of that audience, unfortunately, probably will be turned off by certain elements. But pretty much every movie's like that. For example, when the film August Rush came to theaters, I found that clipping my toenails was a much better use of my time.

Also, glad to see my ratings counted. I was worried for a moment there, racking my brain. "I could have sworn it said I passed the eligibility test ..."

Please, continue writing, you're good at it.
no image submitted Posted by wanderingmbhorn August 24, 2009
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