Nasty Business By: ma_caiti Review of: Gone on: 06/23/2010 PROMISE OF THE PREMISE You do a good job of creating a primal and irresistible core premise and creating a...[more]
A Choice Cut By: ma_caiti Review of: LIFE AMONG THE RUINS on: 09/22/2009 Strong ensemble drama with vivid writing and irresistible flawed characters. Just a great script to read. ON STRUCTURE p3+ Pre-life:...[more]
Ice Cold Thrills By: ma_caiti Review of: Shard (Rewrite 2) on: 02/28/2009 Simply a fantastic thriller. More specifically: INTRO Very good page 1: characters are vivid, details are clear with just enough...[more]
Fuzzy, and not so warm. By: ma_caiti Review of: The Chimera on: 12/28/2008 IMPRESSIONS ON THE INTRO p1 Very catchy, strange lead into this character, his mentality and his work. p3 Frank's annoying...[more]
As high as possible By: ma_caiti Review of: STUCK (Version2) on: 09/21/2008 David Lynch AND Bergman? Ambitious, yes. I really enjoy how the story takes a recursive tone, and Jane assumes the...[more]
Story of a Hard Luck Man By: ma_caiti Review of: The Beloved on: 04/15/2008 Gentlemen, I was impressed by the very clear atmosphere and story you painted, although much of the characterization and set...[more]
